Hey bloggers, today I have just finished doing my DLO for my beach education. I was really easy/hard for me because i was really looking forward to doing this.
You published your writing very nicely and used some great language (seaweed tickling), just remember to edit your writing first :) Check for exclamation marks after onomatopoeia e.g. Whoosh! Also maybe different sentence starters too.
You published your writing very nicely and used some great language (seaweed tickling), just remember to edit your writing first :) Check for exclamation marks after onomatopoeia e.g. Whoosh!
ReplyDeleteAlso maybe different sentence starters too.