Today I have just finished doing my 6 sentence poem. It was fun to do and sort of hard to do. We had to write what we saw, what we remember, who was there, and why did we go their.
Kia ora Oshen Kyla here i really like your sistena poem and i like how you can put a picture of the beach in your readers head i rally like how you you gave detail. Keep it up.
Kia ora Oshen Kyla here i really like your sistena poem and i like how you can put a picture of the beach in your readers head i rally like how you you gave detail.
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Great sistena poem Oshen, you have shown painted a great picture of family time at the beach. Well done :)
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